Eliot was persuaded to alter the passage.

埃利奥特被说服对该进行。

You must indent the first line of a new paragraph.

新起的首行你必须缩格书写。

Footnotes illuminated the difficult passages of the text.

脚注阐明文中难解的。

He had done most of the writing and rewriting himself, reworking key passages again and again.

大部分的写作与工作都是他自己完成的, 并一再主的。

The whole passage could be cancelled.

个都可以删去。

The parlance pressed aforetime, ten inside art gallery arrive this comes to an end for the time being.

按旧时的说法，十里画廊到此告一。

Typesetting: Show your translation in clear paragraph – with a blank line between 2 paragraphs, and underline or overstriking words according to the source document.

明确你的译文的分——两个之间用空格隔开（为“将你的译文以清晰的形式展示——2译文中间空开一行”），根据原文给重点词汇加粗或加下划线。