Eliot was persuaded to alter the passage.

埃利奥特被说服对该段进行修改。

You must indent the first line of a new paragraph.

新起段首行你必须缩格书写。

Footnotes illuminated the difficult passages of the text.

脚注阐明了文中难解段。

He had done most of the writing and rewriting himself, reworking key passages again and again.

大部分写作与修改工作是他自己完, 一再修改了主段。

The whole passage could be cancelled.

整个段以删去。

The parlance pressed aforetime, ten inside art gallery arrive this comes to an end for the time being.

按旧时说法，十里画廊到此告一段。

Typesetting: Show your translation in clear paragraph – with a blank line between 2 paragraphs, and underline or overstriking words according to the source document.

明确你译文分段——两个段之间用空格隔开（改为“将你译文以清晰段形式展示——2段译文中间空开一行”），根据原文给重点词汇加粗或加下划线。